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ParadoxComic
ParadoxComic, November 10th, 2013, 8:14 pm ( Reply )
Sometimes Luna forgets she can just magic herself pretty.
ParadoxComic
ParadoxComic, November 12th, 2013, 10:32 am ( Reply )
@Shiggidy: I'm sorry if my style is really that distracting for you, but I'm not going to change their eyes because it isn't realistic enough. Yes, I know physically their eyes very much defy the laws of eyeballs, but I'm pretty okay with that. Not everything in a comic has to be realistic down to the very hair follicles and corneas of the characters.

Again, I'm sorry this scene wasn't to your liking. Chaos is abrupt and sudden and mysterious, so I felt this scene fit his mannerisms just fine. It might not be to your tastes, which is fine, but it is to mine.

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Quadrant
Quadrant, November 10th, 2013, 8:28 pm ( Reply )
They're gods... So much for being able to have a group meeting over whatever their equivalent of Skype is. They require sleep?

Wonder what he's gonna do. He knows he can't being himself to kill Nia but at the same time knows he has little choice. Cosmic Gary seems very much all powerful. Suppose the only other thing is to try and be honourable and sacrifice himself to save her.
Swagner (Guest), November 10th, 2013, 10:37 pm ( Reply )
@Quadrant:
You know, it occurs to me that english needs different words do distinguish between gods of the patron variety and of the omnipotent creator variety. Using the same word to refer to two such different concepts strikes me as silly.
kamkong, November 11th, 2013, 2:24 am ( Reply )
@Quadrant: Um, since he is THE SUN, him sacrificing himself would kill off every other mortal in their world. So yeah, probably not the best idea.
hkmaly (Guest), November 11th, 2013, 4:29 am ( Reply )
Swagner (Guest): You know why there isn't one? Because everyone believing in "omnipotent creator" insist there are no gods of the other kind. Or at least insisted until Tolkien ... and Tolkien wasn't using english.
Slayah, November 12th, 2013, 2:42 am ( Reply )
None of the characters are omnipotent. Gary feels the need to rid himself of something, and doesn't want to do it personally. (godinally?) And seeing as the rest are a pantheon, none of them are omnipotent either. If Gary was truly omnipotent there would be no other starrygods, and his stated disregard for creation would be odd. He obviously cares about what happens to his god children; seen in the need to distract them with creation while he goes about his business. And since he has business to go about that could be mucked up he has challenges to overcome. Omniscience is disproven through lack of foreknowledge of Nia, and since his/her/its/sexy/their omnipotence is illogical through having shit that must be done right we can conclude that Gary can metaphorically bleed. And therefore less metaphorically have his insubstantial starry ass kicked.
Shiggidy (Guest), November 12th, 2013, 4:29 am ( Reply )
Just thought of this. Since you're colouring their pupils all willy nilly, you've got to understand what that's doing physically. Pupils are black because they absorb the visible spectrum, and bounce back no waves of their own. So yellow pupils would mean that the cornea(?) absorbs all the colours of the visible spectrum, besides yellow. Meaning he's yellow-blind. Quite possibly a hindrance when you're the sun god.

Also, I figured you'd be better with pacing and dialogue, what with this being your second comic. But the conflict setting scene is 3 pages, with vague statements from two people? Lame-O.
Guest, November 12th, 2013, 3:14 pm ( Reply )
@Shiggidy:
geek (Guest), November 12th, 2013, 3:25 pm ( Reply )
one colour blindness has naff all to do with the colour of your pupils. it's to do with the rods and cones in lineing the back of your eye. if you cant see colour it means your missing certain rods or cones. assuming he looks the way he does cause he has to, not cause he wants to, for crying out loud he's a freaking god.